Lightborn: The Tree (2)

Part One: Awakening . Part Two: The Tree . Part 3: Curiouser and Curiouser . Part Four: Deep One .
Part Five: 'Things Beginning' . Part Six: To Come To An End

Uh, so. Yeah.

Here is a Purgatory chapter with bonus +2 shitty digital illustrations which is semi-independent from the rest of my planned stuff. *dies* If you can't see the second picture properly, I added a fuckton of brightness to it for monitors and uploaded here [link] ... if you have to use this one, let me know, since I'd like to know if it's just me or not :S

With the deadline fast approaching, I figured I would make something actually happen rather than just wishing I could produce comic pages with *Kenu 's speed and skill.

I would really appreciate feedback/critique on this, since I don't write a lot of stories, and my pacing may suck. But I want to improve. Just... go gently, since it took some convincing myself that I should post this -_- Tell me if you think it's worth my trying to make more words happen to a page, or if I should just throw my ideas at someone more talented. Or if you found the lack of proper resolution infuriating, since that means that I've probably done a good job of emulating the show. Hurr.

Thanks. I'm going to huddle in the corner for a while now.